Life has become a tangled mess of lamenting.
What coulda, shoulda, woulda…but won’t.
There’ll be no coming together on this.
Dad favors my dating Albert, his financial advisor’s son. I’ll be set for life, according to what I hear when mingling with the jet setters at the country club.
Then there’s mom who’s always pushing Bradford at me. “He’s so good to his mother and his sisters. He’ll treat you like a queen. He already worships the ground you walk on.” Yada, yada, yada.
There’ll never be a good time to break the news.
“Mom and Dad.This is Sheila…my wife.”
Great twist at the end. Good, well-written story. Sorry I’m late in commenting. I’m still catching up on my back email because of my computer being in for repairs for about five days.
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Hope all’s back to normal with your computer. I know how that goes…have had my own techy hiccups from time to time. hugs for the comment…
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I think this is great.. why we are still surprised in the days when this is becoming comon.. but I guess Sheila will be the one to treat the narrator as a queen at the country club…
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ha, ha. Now that’d be something I’d relish…queen at a jet setters’ country club. Once would be more than enough, however. I’m not inclined to…hoity-toity, having grown up poor on a small island out in the Pacific Ocean which, granted, now belongs to the rich and famous. I’d be more like the “fly on the wall” at a country club. And as re acceptance of gays and lesbians being more commonplace? Unfortunately I know of those who still cringe at the thought and refuse to accept them as being like the rest of us. An older brother of mine being one, with whom I’ve had many an argument via these comments. I’ve finally taken to spamming them. There was no talking with him after he declared homosexuals weren’t entitled to heavenly salvation.
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Dear Millie,
Now there’s an unexpected twist in the family tree.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Even I was surprised that I went there, Rochelle. When I do fiction…it really is…fiction. 🙂 hugs…
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Great surprise twist in the end. Maybe a trip with the parents to the Sydney Mardi Gras would help 🙂
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ha, ha. Now that would be a trip to remember. I’d even arrange it myself…gratis. 🙂
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Lovely twist.
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Thanks, Dawn. Always look forward to your input. hugs…
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Ha ha! What a great twist at the end. The parents will probably be in shock for the rest of their lives, but I hope not. Great story!
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Hugs for the gut reaction…to such a shocking turn of events. Not a situation with which I’m personally familiar, but one which exists more often than we probably hear about.
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great story. i like the surprise ending. 🙂 about her parents, well, i hope they’ll eventually learn to accept her or at least get over it 🙂
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In time…hopefully. After all she is their daughter. I like to think this fictional tale mirrors reality in that the family comes to accept that it is her life…not theirs. hugs…
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Great ending and you’re right, Mother and Father will NOT understand. Too bad, go live your own life and enjoy your happiness! Nan 🙂
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Exactly my thoughts! Let live…and love. No harm there…
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Yeah, I don’t think this is going to go over well.
janet
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I think you’ve got that right. 🙂
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Brilliant. A great twist at the end. I hope she plucks up the courage!
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She’ll have to. There’s no hiding a wife forever…or is there? 🙂 hugs…
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Oh the challenges of bending away from the paths others have chosen for us! That takes bravery. Always so interesting to see what creative gems these images release! Nice one. 🙂
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You’re so right! It is truly amazing how writers’ perspectives on the photo prompts can differ so widely. I usually go with the first thought that runs through my mind as I look at the picture. If I dwelt too long on the myriad of ideas I’d come up with, I’d never get the piece out by Friday. hugs…
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Wonderful ending! A great surprise for well-meaning but apparently clueless parents…and the reader as well 🙂
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ha, ha…glad my story made you smile. Not so much for the…clueless parents. hugs…
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Oh, ho, surprised.
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:lol hugs…
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ha, ha. Gotcha! I didn’t know I was going this route…until I went there. Surprised myself as well. 🙂
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Very well done.
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Thanks so much…
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I wouldn’t even consider anyone called Bradford or Albert! A fun story 🙂
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Exactly what I was going for…FUN! hugs…
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lol same here.
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Don’t know where I got those names. Just pulled them out of thin air, I guess. 🙂
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Hmm, that’s going to take a bit of selling back home. Great take on the prompt.
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Wouldn’t it be great if we didn’t have to “sell” our…wants…wishes…and loves? That we could be given full reign over our own lives…come what may…warts and all. But I guess we wouldn’t be human if life ran according to plan. hugs…
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A nice sideways take on the prompt.
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I love that comment…”sideways take.” hugs…
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Lovely surprise ending! I enjoyed reading this very much … 😉
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I’m so glad. You made my day…hugs!
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🙂
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hugs… 🙂
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Thanks! 😀
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