If I think small, petty thoughts…it’s reflected in my stature.
If I hold tight to my pocketbook…it’s reflected in my stature.
If I offer no kind words…it’s reflected in my stature.
If I show no compassion…it’s reflected in my stature.
If I take my problems out on others…it’s reflected in my stature.
If I genuflect to my own image…it’s reflected in my stature.
If my life begins and ends with me…it’s reflected in my stature.
If I am God…it’s reflected in my stature.
I am an island…unto myself.
It’s reflected in my stature.
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Very meaningful response to my photo, Hugmama! This is just beautiful!
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hugs for sharing an inspirational photo…
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Dear Hugmamma, So well done! This shows great character. Is your name Millie? My mothers name was too. Anyway – your writing is superb! Thanks, Nan 🙂
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Hugs for such a thoughtful comment…and I don’t know many other Millies…you made my day!
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whoa, this one was really good. It’s not often you read something about character and integrity. You captured a powerful message here.
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Wow! You’ve made my day. If I can ever return the favor… Lots of hugs…
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The burden of a life lived without proper respect.. great take.. and very deep.
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Thanks, Bjorn. I don’t often consider myself in the league of writers like you and Rochelle. To have you pay me such a compliment is very much appreciated. I’m a pretty straight forward writer. Subtle nuances escape me. I’ll keep trying…hugs!
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very nice piece. the repetition of lines was very effective.
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Like nails on the coffin of a very selfish individual, who died alone bereft of another’s love. Sorry…I got carried away. Almost wrote another flash fiction story…
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Dear Millie,
Quite the reflection. Nicely done.
shalom,
Rochelle
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hugs, Rochelle. Guess I’ve been in a reflective mood since my little one has flown the nest once again…
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I feel as if you’re writing about me. How did you know? 🙂
Lily
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ha, ha. You’ve got a funny bone, for sure, Hafong. I will be over to check it out… 🙂
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This is lovely. The repetition works so very well. Cheers! to you.
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I was fully engaged in the moment. As you’ve discerned. hugs for the comment…
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Hugmamma, Lovely piece. It gives us a lot to think about. Well written. 🙂 —Susan
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I’d written another piece, but decided it was too flippant. So I rewrote something a little more thoughtful…like the mood I’ve been in recently. hugs…
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