I was 7 when I learned Uncle Noah’s secret.
I’d come down to the dock to be alone. Time to myself during a family reunion that could suffocate.
Uncle Noah and I were loners. Perhaps that’s why he never married.
Although he fathered no children, they were always drawn to my uncle, myself included.
That fateful day I wandered off, hoping to catch some fish about which I could later boast.
Rounding the hedge of giant spruces, I gasped at what my eyes beheld.
Uncle Noah’s boots stood empty.
A sleigh drawn by reindeer was pirating him away.
Ho, ho, ho!!!
What??? You mean Santa’s real but Mrs. Claus isn’t? That’s just not right. 🙂 What fun for the Christmas season!
janet
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Well…it may be that Mrs. Claus keeps the home fires burning…elsewhere, like at the North Pole? Maybe that’s why Santa’s a loner. Perhaps he’s comfortably tucked in his own bed every night. 😆
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That was so sweet 🙂
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Just a little holiday cheer…to warm the heart…and ward off the chill.
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Wonderful story.. I was happy at the end… expected something sinisters
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I reread it after Sandra’s comment, and saw that the tale could definitely have had a sinister ending. The mindset I was in when I wrote this didn’t have me in that frame of mind. I was totally heading toward…Santa. Interesting how words can mean different things to different readers…and writers. So glad I made you happy, Bjorn.
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Yes, Virginia, there is a Santa Claus. Nicely done, Millie.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. A little holiday cheer to lift everyone’s spirits. This season and the good feelings it engenders is what the whole world needs. It keeps Mandela’s spirit of peace and good will alive. Wish it could go on forever! hugs!
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aww this made me smile. excellent job with the misdirection! 🙂
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Hugs for the compliment. Love to make everyone smile. Life’s so much grander that way…
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How cute-hope next time around he got to ride with his Uncle Noah 🙂
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Seems like a definite possibility, since they’re two-of-a-kind. 🙂 And who knows…like uncle, like nephew…
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😉 True!
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Cute story, made me smile!
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Every now and then, our spirits need a little lift. This was my offering for the holiday season…
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this is delightful!
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What a wonderful comment. Thank you!
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I like that…Christmas magic. Happy to have sprinkled some holiday fairy dust your way…
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Very nice Christmas story–creative use of the prompt!!!
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Thanks! I tend to find inspiration close at hand…
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A great topical twist that made me uncomfortable about what I’d thought I was going to read. Well done for a skilful piece of misdirection, beautifully executed.
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Hugs for a comment that makes me feel good about my writing skills. Friday Fictioneers has certainly helped to develop them. If I can focus long enough, maybe I’ll write that e-book I’ve been wanting to do. Although that’s longer than 100 words…a lot longer.
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Go for it!
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You inspire me, Sandra. Be careful what you wish for…
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Great story, love the Christmas magic!
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